Friday, 25 July 2014

My Mana Whenua ad

Since last term for inquiry we have been doing mana Whenua and Room 17 agreed on doing posters and ad's .Six girls had got chosen to do ad's.I was one of them Liona Mihi and I were in a team.
Our hurt free ad from Room 17 on Vimeo.
I was the photographer I think I done well at keeping the ipad still.And I think I should work on trying not to make any noise.I had lots of fun working together with Liona and Mihi.

Thursday, 3 July 2014

Show don't tell

Today in writing I wrote a story about hiding.

We had to try to show it not tell it.I think I done well in using describing words and i think i need to get better at putting more information about were I was.

“Please don’t find me please don’t find me”I thought to myself.My hands were shaking my heart was pounding I could see pitch black.”Ready or not here I come”.I heard near by.”You cant find me you cant find me”I whispered to myself a ray of light was coming in as I was peeping through the light.I could hear big footsteps getting closer and closer. I was trying not to move standing there as straight as a statue I thought I was safe behind lots of clothes.It felt like hours had  gone past “Lets get this over and done with”I said with a big frown on my face.”Here I am come and get me” I could here lots of children racing down the hallway.I found you”.