Tuesday, 14 October 2014

My Holiday

Tuesday 14th October 2014

In the holidays I went to my Aunty Maude’s house.  We layed in the soft warm blankets and watched movie’s.  “Oooh a long pink snake” I said describing my lollie.  “Mmm a crunchy chewy pebble”I said.  “Ahh a sour pineapple and chewing gum.  Boom Bang was the funny movie we were watching.”Look my favourite parts on”. I yelled while shaking my Aunty.  “Ohhh I’m tired”.I said slowly going to sleep.  


1 comment:

  1. Hey, hey, hey well done Hine, I'm sure the movie was funny. I only spotted one mistake, but it was only a little one. OK you have to remember to put a space after a full spot. Ka mau te wihi kotero.